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Sudden Tears
Contributed by
stitch
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:45:29 PM in AEST
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Where do you hide when the pain
is humming greedily in your face
and your neighbor doesn't understand
when best friends desert you
to your wanton pillow?
There is nowhere to go
when the sin is a part of you
desperate seed seeking a foothold
morsel of dirt in which to sink its fears
Can a mother ever run out of tears?
How many nights can she cry herself to sleep?
A woman I've never met is hurting,
and I am crying her tears
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by irememberyou on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:55:54 PM AEST
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| beautiful. i like it. i dont think i could write a poem like that, all my poems are simple words, but not yours, they have depth to them! good job. |
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST
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A mother is a mother and we all cry tears for each other at one time or another. There is no place to hide. The only friend we have is our Lord and only by praying and placing the problem in his hands can he ever solve it. It is so easy to lose your footing without HIm but with him we can overcome it all in time. Stitch, this is deeply touching.
Rita |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:10:29 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing as always.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by bernard on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:12:56 PM AEST
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| Sad Stitch very sad.top marks from bernard |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:05:12 PM AEST
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Somehow i think everyone think that Mothers are suposed to be the heros, the one who will protect you from anything while they themselves dont know how to protect them.
Anyways i thought the poem was powerful, and i missed that from you Stitchy.
Jane
(Who feels like she didn't make sence at all) |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:40:15 PM AEST
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Oh Stitchy...this is so sad...
That last stanza really broke my heart.
I think this is a poem that everyone can relate to in some way, and you have put your feelings on the page beatifully.
Great write Stitchy, it's good to see you posting again.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 06:32:49 PM AEST
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I know the pain behind this one my dear friend, I live it everyday.
Wish that we could turn back time and steer our lives on a different path but thats not possible, so I guess we just have to struggle on.
Roses
Larry
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:42:26 PM AEST
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powerfully written the middle stanza really hit
hard since I can relate to it all to well. Don't let
your pain get the best of you hold your head
up high and stare it down.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Blu on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:56:30 PM AEST
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Wow, very touching indeed.
I love the word "wanton" by the way...I'd forgotten how expressive it is.
Great write Stich, keep it up.
Blu |
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:39:02 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, it pulls at my heart in ways I could never express.
Thanks for a beautiful write.
Shannon |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 02:07:08 PM AEST
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I had forgotten how powerful words can be. You have a knack for that. (Reminding me)
This poem grabbed a hold of my heart, twisted it into an 8 double time and I hurt for some reason. It is hard to clarify.
I just know that suddenly I am extremely moved.
Extremely.
Kie |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:15:43 AM AEST
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This seems to draw from some primal emotion deep in all of us. It touches me stitchy, very emotional piece.
I hope the two of you work it out....Hugs |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:02:18 PM AEST
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It breaks my heart to see a mother cry and yet I've been known to cause the tears myself sometimes.
Mom's are just as human as the rest of us... just... something about them has impressed upon us all that they're never as weak as we ourselves are. Odd, isn't it?
I love you, Stitcheroo.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Archie on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:25:11 AM AEST
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This was a very sad poem to me. It is sad to feel alone. It's like this song:
"A room is still a room
even when there's nothing there but gloom
but a room is not a house
and a house is not a home
when two of us are far apart
and one of us has a broken heart."
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:02:45 PM AEST
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How did I miss this ? How did I ... How ?
There is a tremendous amount of emotion in this Stitch. I gotta tell ya ... those last two lines ... can you imagine how much better a world we would live in ... if everyone had such empathy ?
I greatly admire your ability with words, your unique style and your perception. Nicely penned Stitch.
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:41:57 AM AEST
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I know you know, and I don't have to tell you, because this write was written by His pen.
Lovely poem.
*****Can a mother ever run out of tears?
How many nights can she cry herself to sleep?
A woman I've never met is hurting,
and I am crying her tears
Words like these lets me believe that I know you well.
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:35:39 AM AEST
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Oh Stichi
these words recall a Psalm (cannot remember which one) how God weeps and grieves.over his children.
I am profoundly moved at your empathy with human suffering, especially the suffering incurred by love.
Wonderful job
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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Re: Sudden Tears
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:50:32 AM AEST
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| glad to see you are still putting your beautiful pen to paper |
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