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I'll See You Soon

Contributed by cooley1818 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I cant remember the last time i was happy
i cant remember the last time i cared
i cant remember the last i time felt sorry
i cant remember the last time i was scared
The point im making
is i been living life with out a emotion
without sheding a tear
without any devotion
this isnt foward progress
its just a downhill slope
im falling faster each second
losing my wishes for hope
im chokin on that memory
of the time u came by
im stuck in this position
theres no reason to cry
mistakes are the outcome
of the happiest events
when something is so perfect
theres nothing wrong to prevent...
but take a step back
then think about moving foward
your next move crucial
your life may be lowerd
im stuck at the bottom
along with my heart
with no chance of getting back up
no chance to fall back to the start
I am prolongin this end
the end of you and me,
but little do i know
id already set u free
it wasnt my choice,
i just let it slip away
away from reality
away from everything
my days are no longer
the most beautiful days in paridise
no longer never ending fairy tales
but gambles with the losing pair of dice
cant i just skip the chapter?
of the time i was dieing in lonley solitude
or reverse the pages
and resume life without a wordless attitude
its just the story of my life
being chased down and abused
forever trying to hide
but never was your love refused
i cant help it
where did it all go
all the years together
just to hear u say no
it was a cowardly escape
to run away
to hide behind the shadows
to slowly become stray
one years passed
and there still isnt a word
its a speechless denial
is this what u prefer?
your right around the corner
why cant i see
see this crazy pattern
or see the end for me
define your love
define your hate
release your pain
hide your fate
discover life
living to be free
discover lonleynes
it isnt easy?
you may be happy
but i know your still sad
your chokin on the past
the past we once had
i know you cant forget it
it just wont go away
it was the most pastionit love
its here to stay
just stomach the pain
like i have in the past
try to keep up the pase
with time moving so fast
shouldnt i love
just to see you hurt
but my heart is in crumbles
and cover in dirt
if i cant be with you
and see you smile
just let me know your happy
and resume the lonley mile
keep the distance
from heart to heart
racing to the end
furthering from the start
i wont give up
have i yet?
my minds to sure
and my heart is set
so goodbye for now
i'll see you soon
maybe not tomorrow
but i'll see yo soon




Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2005-06-02 20:44:32]
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Re: I'll See You Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:55:39 PM AEST
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this was a sad poem, made my heart go out to you and feel for you and the pain you are going through (I am sorry, and will pray for you to feel better.) your words spoke with emotions and the flow worked them to there fullest. I hope that you will fel better soon and post some happier poems for us to read. God bless.

KaBob


Re: I'll See You Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by irememberyou on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:02:26 PM AEST
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A very long, and sad poem. i loved it! my blessings are with u.


Re: I'll See You Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by Adnausiam on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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Man that's an awesome write. It puts me back exactly where i have been before. Everything you say here I have thought in the past. Don't you just wish you could scream some of these lines in her face sometimes? lol that's how i feel about it anyway. Good job. peace.


Re: I'll See You Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:18:03 AM AEST
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Totally great




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