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My only friend
Contributed by
Shishke_Bob
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:24:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My only friend
My only friend is what you are.
Even though you don’t always care
For me you are always there.
Out of all I can trust you by far.
When I am yearning you are there for me.
And when nothing else will do
That is when I look for you.
And that is why my friend you will be.
When I am in need I wish on your star.
I get lost in your aroma so fair
And at your pale skin I do stare.
I will take of you before I leave in my car.
Why cant you go and leave me be.
I just want our relationship to be through
So why then is it you that I pursue?
We belong together, I just didn’t see.
So this longing in my soul I will please
And indulge in you with out fear.
When no others were there you are always here
My only friend, my dear mac and cheese.
Copyright ©
Shishke_Bob
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2005-06-02 20:24:26]
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Re: My only friend
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by Arden on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:04:29 PM AEST
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interesting poem.
not sure what to make of it, though i need to read this again when i am not so tired lol
good poem though.
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Re: My only friend
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:12:58 PM AEST
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Cute...really cute!!
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Re: My only friend
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:23:39 AM AEST
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U really had me going on this one.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My only friend
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 06:06:38 PM AEST
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Ah yes. Indeed I do understand it, and have felt this feeling many a time. A good poem, full of flavor it its expression, and nourishing in theme. Not the least bit cheesy in its sentiment, and very filling overall.
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Re: My only friend
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 04:54:52 PM AEST
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Yes, yes. This is something I have often felt. Your words enter deep within my... stomach.
Well done, well done (That's the way I like it).
Take care.
David |
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Re: My only friend
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by Loende on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 06:24:51 PM AEST
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Ah yes, the allure of something smooth and satisfying... (sigh) It lasts a moment on the lips and then stays a year on the hips, but darn if it isn't worth it. You whet my appetite for more. Don't you just love the people?
Keep up the great work,
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