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Milk in a Margarita Glass
Contributed by
freckle
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:09:15 PM in AEST
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Milk in a Margarita Glass
Drinking milk from a margarita glass
that isn't glass but plastic
Clear, with colored squares
Eating
sausage
and
potatoes
with
bread
and
butter
Actually margarine
But who cares
Really?
I am alone
you are not here
And as I finish my food
and milk
I am still hungry
Still thirsty
And I wait
for you
to come
to me.
Carol
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2005-06-02 20:09:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:22:42 PM AEST (User
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Well, thank goodness the bouquet of milk is not affected by the shape of the glass it is served in. I have drank wine from a Tippee cup and tasted the same to me. My food and beverage choices are mine and so is whatever I/you wish to eat or drink them from. Yeah, Carol, do it your way.
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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:35:20 AM AEST (User
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A sad but very expressive from the heart write, nicely done carol . . .
Benedetto John Papa Sr.
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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:08:35 PM AEST (User
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LOL Milk and Margaritas? You sure your ok Carolita?
Anyways i think you did well with this peice. I enjoyed reading it and like Blueboy said "It has a "There" sounds to it".
Jane xx |
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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:31:57 PM AEST (User
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A good poem. I enjoyed the format. Dammit I never get that many comments ;) |
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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass
(User Rating: 1 ) by NDean on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 02:41:57 PM AEST (User
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Cool Poem
Different
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