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hmmm damn lie

Contributed by ebooibo on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:08:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When u needed me, I was there for you.
When u lied to me, I believed you.
When you needed help, I helped you.
When hit me I apologized to you.
When you needed you space I backed off,
I gave you room to get *****.
i tried to be all you wanted and more,
But in the end you left me to lie on the floor.
You pierced with your ***** ****** of me as our souls intertwined as one.
It Entered my body and striped me of my soul.
As I stand here puzzuled as to when did i loose this staring
role.
I will remember that life sucks and it is never that easy to let go.
Why do they make up a feeling known as love?
They say life is a game you should play your cards right,
But I gave you my heart and I got screwed twice.
Maybe you will never understand what it is that you missed,
But ask your friend Randy and he will tell you this.
You see I gave you so much of myself,
that now that your gone I have no one else.
I hear that you are having a good time,
I am telling you enjoy it now cuz soon it will be my time to shine.
You never cared about my feelings,
Its funny because I still care about yours
I am not nieve to know that the only feelings you spare is Renee's.
I am not full of pride do I am letting you know that I am hurting.
If you care to know I blame you for just leaving.
But, I am happy to admit that when I am down and my feelings are crushed.
I was woman enough to let you know that I am taking this ruff.
And I know that you think that I will wait to see when it will be ur turn.
I can honestly say I hope that you heart would burn.
Just so that you can empathize that feeling.
Of what it feels like to be so true and just have ***** thrown all over you.

Copyright © ebooibo ... [ 2005-06-02 20:08:53]
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Re: hmmm damn lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 12:38:14 AM AEST
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Very good.. i like it

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