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picture IN space
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The rudimentary function
Of a pod such as that of a person
Is to pour a life long lesson
Into a last phrase, to be remembered
Overfilled and stuffed with imagination
The ego about to bust from lack of starvation
So in answer to
The famously posed question
I choose the glass half full
And seek out my fulfillments
I choose to see it through
Negate the coldness
That seeps
Cross out the words
That creep
They won’t let me fall
Asleep
They keep me restless
So that I may speak with you
Give it time and it will become clear
Couldn’t expect to learn it all, in these few years
I can hardly begin to imagine
Yet its with such vindictive satisfaction
What exactly could have happened
If I hadn’t stopped
If this was a dead end block
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jyssvw22
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2005-06-02 19:08:39]
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Re: picture IN space
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:20:42 PM AEST
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Good thing you stopped Jyss...This is a very honest write and I like it. I'm going to ponder it in more detail though....Hmmmm.....!
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Re: picture IN space
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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We are all still and always will be a work in progress. Great write.
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