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Celestial Dance
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:25:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Enter Earth with all its' splendor in place
Spinning on axis throughout all of space
Very much in synchronized flight
With all the other celestial bodies of night
Sing the chorus of Angels, do-se-do, around and round we go
As I gaze into the interstellar night time solar system sky
The stars twinkle and wink as they speed by
Too numerous to mention
But beautiful enough to draw attention
Sing the chorus of Angels, do-se-do, around and round we go
The moon with its' softer glow
Dances a shuffle across the sky to show
Circling its' Mother Earth, by itself
Sometimes full, others a sliver of self
Sing the chorus of Angels, do-se-do, around and round we go
With the backdrop of the Milky Way lifting high
Ushers in the planets to perform that night
Each twirling on its' own axis as by space and time
All with their individual shape and design
Sing the chorus of Angels, do-se-do, around and round we go
The comets enter into the foray
Trailing angel dust along the way
To provide a magical dimension
Bringing this significant event to everyones attention
Sing the chorus of Angels, do-se-do, around and round we go
With the dawning of the suns' bright glow
Came the crescendo of the show
Our glimpse into the synchronized dance
The symphony of cosmic shape and Heavenly circumstance
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-06-02 18:25:59]
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:35:07 PM AEST
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| WOW! that was a cool poem! |
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:41:30 PM AEST
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Didn't seem so hard to me!! You did it so brilliantly.....Great imagery..
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:04:51 PM AEST
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This is absolutely splendid. Your imagery was celestial magic. I so enjoyed this piece of work. Thank you.
Rita |
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:41:52 AM AEST
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What a magical poem with great and cristal clear imagery.
I just love this. Amazing work Will.
Jane xoxo |
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 02:16:31 PM AEST
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"Hard to describe" indeed! Hard to express how much I enjoyed this...How's this?
BRAVO!!!!
Scorp ; ) |
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:37:25 PM AEST
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| you just have a way with poetry, that makes me want to read more and more, but because of time constraints i can read as much as i wish. keep writing and impressing. |
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Re: Celestial Dance
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by mom11159 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:18:28 PM AEST
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I applaud you for this absolutely exceptional poem. Breathtaking and beautiful your imagery is perfect giving me a clear and amazing picture as I read your words captivate me into the poem just wanting more.
Excellent job I loved it
Cathy |
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