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what you never thought you'd hear
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:58:51 PM in AEST
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No you can't fix my hair and,
no you can't pick what i ware.
No i won't buy the same shoes and,
no i don't want to look like you.
The only thing you talk about is the way i should be.
I don't want to be anything or anyone but me.
I don't want to be a clone oh please just leave me alone.
I used to want to be like you.
I would copy everything you'd do,
but now that i am older i see.
Now i am happy just being me.
You never care what is on my mind.
It hurts when you think i can do nothing right.
Even though this may not prove it i really do love you.
But, no you can't fix my hair and,
no you can't pick what i ware.
No i won't buy the same shoes and,
no i don't want to look like you.
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Re: what you never thought you'd hear
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:06:24 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. The topic is light and the rhyme scheme reflects that. I have three siblings and I can totally relate to what you're saying. Good write!
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Re: what you never thought you'd hear
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by Freak-of-the-Week on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:23:51 AM AEST
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| She only does it 'cause she loves ya. Plus, she's your big sister - what do you expect. ^_^ But it's nice to know you stand up again the people that try to change you or mold you into their likeness. You just keep being Rusti (even if she's kwazy). ^_~ |
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