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Distance
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Most hurts and wounds time will repair
through ignorance not; that one cannot hear
it only knows its own way of things
and has no time for the heart it stings,
Wounds be cold and bleeding
if mortal help you be needing
alas what does it matter to
the one who inflicted it upon you?
Either way you turn to stone
or ashes underground unknown
safe your soul from brutal life
nought the one who caused the strife.
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;~:*:~;
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2003-01-03 00:00:00]
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Re: Distance
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:03:50 AM AEST
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Loved this write, Nessa....
Jenni |
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Re: Distance
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by venkat on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:44:34 AM AEST
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| Dear friend Nessa! The poem is brief and beautiful, but I would like to see you cheerful in this new year. Time definitely will heal that wound. No stone and ashes will help. only a hope you should invite . come on! raise up your true spirit. with best wishes1..Venkat |
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Re: Distance
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 01:47:56 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome write - very emotional and cuts to the quick. Well written. |
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Re: Distance
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by spooky on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 06:20:12 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN,,VERYTOUCHING,,,
keepm comin |
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Re: Distance
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:49:45 PM AEST
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| true |
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Re: Distance
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:04:55 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is such a touching write. It true as well. So very true. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Distance
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:20:48 PM AEST
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| i really like this one it captures me |
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