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Take Away
Contributed by
lilch4ever
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Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You took away my innocence.
You took away the
happiness in my heart and eyes.
You took away all things that made me who I am.
You took away my excess
to achievements.
You took away my smile and zill to become
successful.
You took away all hope for life.
You took away all that I worked so hard for.
You took away my heart and left me in a pool of blood.
Most of all you took away my
mind and filled it with
nothing but negative things.
You took away my innocence.
Written 2002.
Copyright ©
lilch4ever
... [
2003-01-02 23:40:00]
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Re: Take Away
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:42:28 PM AEST
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This is so sad, but so well written.... Beautiful write...
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Re: Take Away
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by EmSal on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:22:26 PM AEST
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| So true even if we pretend not to care and even when people say they are only words, but it can hurt and if it goes on and on and on then it can have a big effect. And it isn't always good to turn your heart to stone so yeah great poem but kinda sad. |
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