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New Beginning
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:03:54 PM in AEST
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Can I just carry you around in my pocket to make me feel good?
you make a girl feel so special; more than she ever thought she could
I'll pull you out when my world gets too bleak
and recite some of your words that make me go weak
Not sure what I did to deserve all this....
your words are so warm, like a lovers soft kiss
I used to dread waking up to my living nightmare
my heart broken and black; dead beyond repair
Now I'm like a penny all shiny and new
I wake up in the morning, first thoughts are of You
everyday getting brighter like the rays from the sun
I can't say for sure yet, but I think you're the one....
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Re: New Beginning
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:19:29 PM AEST
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I love this. I just love seeing unhappy people become happy!!!!!!! Just accept it as a gift from the universe and don't question. It will last as long as it lasts and no longer. However it turns out, it is still a precious gift given to you.
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Re: New Beginning
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:38:01 PM AEST
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I love to see you beaming this is an incredible write embrace these moments and bask in them
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Re: New Beginning
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:43:13 PM AEST
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wow this poem was beutiful, i too am happy to see you so happy...the ripple effect begins from you...whoever is getting carried around in your pocket is truely a lucky soul....cant wait to hear more....dont get too soft now...lol........bye bye scorp
fantastic write as always...
if anybody knows who scorp is talking about please let us know..lol....:)
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Re: New Beginning
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:58:31 PM AEST
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You will know it in your heart when you found true love. True love asks for nothing and comes to you sincere.
Embrace it with both hands and enjoy every minute of it.
Very nice write scorp, very delicate.
Huggsss,
Nats.
"When you find your one true love then you have touched your own heaven" Madhatter aka Steve. |
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Re: New Beginning
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:55:39 PM AEST
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this is divine intervention..
a gift from above,
both your new love and the poem..
(suffice it to say, we all make our own happiness)
fantastic write!
Billy |
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Re: New Beginning
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:05:51 PM AEST
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Great poem, nice flow and I am so happy for you , you deserve to be happy!!!!!
Hugs Leia |
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Re: New Beginning
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 07:18:00 PM AEST
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This is an incredibly beautiul write. Full of joy and optimism... I love it
Jenni |
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Re: New Beginning
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by irememberyou on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:06:56 PM AEST
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| I love it, its such a wonderful poem! By reading this, the weight of my world just lifted up off my shoulders, and caused me to drift into a place where love was actually recited truthfully, because not all love can be seen. I hope he see's how precious he is to you! |
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Re: New Beginning
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:26:44 AM AEST
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Very nice scorp gave me a nice feeling while
reading it, lovely peice of poetry . . .
Benedetto John Papa Sr.
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Re: New Beginning
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th January 2021 @ 02:38:42 AM AEST
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Too bad it rarely lasts.
Charming indeed.............. |
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