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EcHo

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:38:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

running away in the void
feeling your endless pain
i know who you are
even though were apart
such hard times
it seems weve been through evrything
turned of the light so we
wouldn't see the pain
rushing down in my veins
we were so scared.....
even though we were always there
tommorow..
we felt no one heard our sorrow
left unsaid,unseen

and i hear the
echo,echo,echo,echo
your still crying out to me
let go,let go,let go,let go
forget your fantasy
some dreams never stay the same
you end up forgetting your own name
because you drowned yourself in pain
should have let go......
i guess you didnt know

looking back,life seems like a movie
evrythings imaginary,
false tears and faking joy
your smiles were always lies
id see right through your face
not all bad was good for someone
evryone has to pay
even though im still waiting for the day

i saw what they did to you
they deserve to be ashamed
some people are giving up
just letting go of your grasping hand
your voice seeps into my dreams or nighmares
whichever one i want
i wish that i could go back again
i miss evrything so much
i dont care on screwing up
just be there,just wait for me
all of you,just wait for me
ill be there in your dreams,
talk to me,im here
im here.
can you hear my echo?

Copyright © MysticFireFairy ... [ 2005-06-02 14:38:20]
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Re: EcHo (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:02:31 PM AEST
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I agree with this poem. I drown myself in the memories of the past and the echoes are telling me to let go but these echcoes are way too faint for me to hear them. But this is about YOU! This was a really good poem and I hope you keep writing!

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