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Happy Now
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:38:02 PM in AEST
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Now I'm gone
I'm sorry it took so long
All I had to do was slit my wrist
and that was the end of it
don't worry I didn't feel any pain
I faded away just like the rain
Being dead isn't so bad
it's better than the life I had
Now everthing is right
and all I had to do was step into the light
Don't worry I'm in hell
it's not that hard to tell
There's no one here to tell me what to do
and I don't have to try to be like you
Don't worry about me
this is where i'm supose to be
Away from the world
to be this lonely girl
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Re: Happy Now
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by crimson_regret420 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:04:03 PM AEST
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I love it. keep up the good work.
ºx| Elena |xº |
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Re: Happy Now
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:04:13 PM AEST
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*Sigh* That poem is how i feel most days lately
Very Well written.. from start to finish..My Favorite is last stanza.
"Don't worry about me
this is where i'm supose to be
Away from the world
to be this lonely girl"
Keep writin
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: Happy Now
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:35:18 PM AEST
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Amber, you are not alone my angel... I love you, great poem babe...as always
~Clark |
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Re: Happy Now
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:18:20 PM AEST
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| sorry, ::plucks you back into this world:: you can be happy here. ::injects you with the sadness antibiotic:: now this only has mild side effects of weezing, coughing, heart attacks, liver failure, and brain dsyfuntion. we havent had many reported cases of brain dysfunctions though, simple because most humans no longer use them anyway, hehe. happy birthday amber. |
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