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my silent cries
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:37:14 AM in AEST
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My head is light, my vision goes black
Once your involved you can't go back.
Tears fall unwillingly down my swollen red cheeks.
Nobody has the confort I obsesivly seek.
I feel like puking, but I'm only greeted by stale air.
My throat closes, nobody seems to care.
My body shutters, it's in command
I need to sit, I'm too weak to stand.
Head rushes and wide eyes.
Can't you hear my silent cries?
Save me from my inner disaster.
I'm deconstructing myself faster and faster.
Everyday comes closer to my new end.
Please save me from myself.
Show me your a true friend
Kate Ecklund
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Re: my silent cries
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by seci on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:40:42 AM AEST
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i hope that you are ok. i hope that you can find comfort in yourself somehow, but don't do anything foolish, please don't. again, i hope you do get better. and your poem, i like.
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Re: my silent cries
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:55:21 AM AEST
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"Save me from my inner disaster
I'm deconstructing myself faster and faster"
very nice and so very dark. I hope you keep you head high and keep writing the great poems that you do.. they're good to forward to. dw |
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Re: my silent cries
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:33:17 AM AEST
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| i liked this, simple language but a powerful message. |
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