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Simple
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:33:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A slice of perfection which overcomes me
The delight of my day with unbridled enthusiasm
A specific sensation I can barely begin to divulge
The pertinent information is locked in the vault
A foreign dialect spoken in retrograde rhetoric
Splendor and its assets prove a vital component
The piece of the rock that fell from its mountain
Like the bird from the flock that abandoned its nest
Like the soul who is trapped yet flees to open fields
Among the soil that spawns the grass and feeds
The natural wonders of the great escape
The convincing misnomer that supercedes facts
A distinguishable attribute like white on black
Precautionary measures are taken to ensure
The safety of my ego, as the id rips its hole
As the death instinct battles the life source
As the mirrored shadow bounces back its dark pulse
A floatation device, if the collision is even twice
Twice as hard as it used to be, doubled is the survival strategy
To regain consciousness and my coma stolen memories
To polish the silver lining and dust the wood of its bland grime
The lighthouse that sits deserted at the far end of the beach
Meet me at the very top of the winding metallic stairs
Where the visibility is at its peak
As the shooting star prepares to fall
Kiss me once
For the simplicity of it all
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Re: Simple
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by seci on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:43:03 AM AEST
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| this poemis beautiful. i truly like. |
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Re: Simple
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:47:39 PM AEST
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OH MY....here come the tears....; ) This is just beautiful, truly beautiful...I can relate to this one so well.
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Re: Simple
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:54:06 PM AEST
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A slice of perfection indeed.
That was what I thought when I read it.
Well done
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Re: Simple
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:38:35 PM AEST
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This is a delightful poem of perfection and happiness in your world and I think it is splendid. I wish you many many more days like this in your lifetime. Sometimes simple is the very best of everything.
Rita |
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