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picture frame
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:18:31 AM in AEST
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An empty picture frame
Hung on a wall…
What its there for
I can’t seem to recall..
An empty feeling
Kept deep inside
My heart is broken
My love has died..
Empty hearts
And broken dreams
Makes it more
Than what it seems
A folded picture
Found below
The picture frame
And where it should
I open the frame and
A letter falls out
I don’t want to know
What that letters about
But I open it any way
Not know what I’ll read
Out of the letter
Falls out a seed
In the letter says plant this
Seed and it will grow
And all of the pain
You will surely let go
Because with growth
A wound will heal
And you will learn
Again how to feel
This seed represents you
Your broken heart
Now you can make
A new beginning a clean start
This letter taught me
More than I knew about my self
So I move that frame
And put it on a shelf
Still empty but some how
It represents more
Because I know now
What I didn’t know before…
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2005-06-02 11:18:31]
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Re: picture frame
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:44:43 AM AEST
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Eternityandaday
Wonderful poem I really like it and the ryming made it flow so smooth.I like the Idea of a seed and a new life of fun and happiness.
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Re: picture frame
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by givingin on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:28:18 PM AEST
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Great poem.
I wish I could find that letter,
but sadley it's been lost in the sorrow and pain I have felt recently.
GREAT write.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: picture frame
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by cleoaurora on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:28:08 PM AEST
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beautifully written poem... love it very much!
i could feel like i was the one who opened the frame and found the letter when i read this poem...!
great writing. keep it up! =) |
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Re: picture frame
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by RebelRose on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 07:04:18 AM AEST
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| this is really good i like the empty picture frame with the letters and how it went from meaning heartbreak to meaning new beginnings |
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