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By The Silent Window
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:42:01 AM in AEST
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I sit alone, by the silent window.
watching the dance, of falling rain.
The raindrops echo, my tears of sorrow.
That accompanies, my waltz of pain.
A freezing breeze, of absent harmony.
Sings the loneliness, of a tango by one.
It's empty chorus, a hollow melody.
The imperfections, of steps out of rhyme.
The staccato beats, of tempo has died.
it's flame and rhythm, it's warmth is gone.
The heart's metronome, is stilled by ice.
It's love forgotten, as once-popular songs.
All that's left, an abandoned dance floor.
Grey with dust, with notes of broken dreams.
Of hope bereft, it's dances done for.
Into the dusk, with echoes of might have beens.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-06-02 10:42:01]
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Re: By The Silent Window
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:46:19 PM AEST
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Get back out on that dance floor and find a new partner. Life can only begin again if you let it.
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Re: By The Silent Window
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:46:33 PM AEST
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pulled at my heartstrings, each word a flowing masterpiece of your heart and talent
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Re: By The Silent Window
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:27:28 AM AEST
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Incredible poetry Baronhawk. Really felt the emotion in this one, the emptiness, and the tortured futility~! When I was young I danced almost every night, and when one partner left, I went out and found another.........do that for you too Baronhawk, don't sit in the rain all alone, life is too short!
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Re: By The Silent Window
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:28:32 PM AEST
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| Your comment doesn't do this justice, its good so don't put it down even if its by being sarcastic |
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Re: By The Silent Window
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by freckle on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 07:48:45 PM AEST
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Good write! I like it! Kind of a melody of its own too. Good job. I like your imagery.
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