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The Start
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:17:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She licked her lip
and bit her nail.
she wondered if she could bail
She knew it was too late
as the coaster rolled up its steep rail.
she grabbed hold of her date,
as they went roaring down the trail!
Her stomach left high in the sky,
she screamed out her heart,
vowed not to let life pass her by
Because this
was just
the start
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2005-06-02 02:17:43]
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Re: The Start
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:17:04 AM AEST
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| Hey! nice poem! very different.. like a breath of fresh air! |
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Re: The Start
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:12:30 PM AEST
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aww honey
it is a breathe of fresh air so different then any other writes .good job.
love and hugs
mom |
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Re: The Start
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:03:08 AM AEST
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I like this. Isn't it strange how life teaches us lessons. Who would think a roller coaster ride could do that? You are certainly braver than I. I have never ridden one in my life, and never plan to. I will learn my lessons with my feet on the ground. lol
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: The Start
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by aplsdka on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:58:18 PM AEST
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| I love it. its a really awesome poem. wow. lol. |
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