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Running Water
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:26:32 PM in AEST
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By running water I shall rest,
by spring and pond or fountain...
where floods a crack where eagles nest
and washes down a mountain.
That steams a canyon's jagged walls
or thickened woods and doubles
around the peaks at waterfalls
with rainbow spray and bubbles.
Moistened moss clothe living rock
where running water gushes..
To running water bluebirds flock,
with cardinals and thrushes.
My vision's trapped where lightly flows
the mountain's rushing daughter...
For poems are revealed to those
who rest by running water.
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Man_On_High
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2005-06-01 22:26:32]
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Re: Running Water
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:27:44 PM AEST
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awesome as usual
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Re: Running Water
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:33:45 PM AEST
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now that is a truly lovely visual. think i could stand a lifetime of living there. nature at her finest.
rita |
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Re: Running Water
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by SoUR_GuRL67 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:17:25 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. Well done.
~sourgurl~ |
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Re: Running Water
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:49:41 PM AEST
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| Excellent expression used in this piece...Very nicely done. Scorp. |
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Re: Running Water
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:25:19 AM AEST
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| Very visual and quite the experience too!! I liked it a lot. dw |
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Re: Running Water
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:54:19 PM AEST
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| Dang man this poem was killen it, a very thoughtfully expressive beautifull poem. SLipSiX! |
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Re: Running Water
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:02:13 PM AEST
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I just loved the flow of this..and the imagery is great!!
Jenni |
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Re: Running Water
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:12:28 PM AEST
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Again...
My deepest thanks..
Billy |
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Re: Running Water
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:05:35 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooo wwwhatttt a write!!!!!
A masterpeice of heavens beauty on planet Earth.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Running Water
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 12:53:56 PM AEST
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Of course you know I was drawn to this piece for the title alone-
[you know of my love for water]
.. but what follows is as breathtaking as a summer sky just as the sun is setting. I have
found water of any kind, [lakes, rivers, streams, even rain] to be most inspiring and
this piece is obvious proof I am not the only one. The metaphors are so vividly beautiful.
The words flow as gently as water itself and commands as soft an inspiration. One of the
lovlier poems on nature I've read. Stunning !!
~Breezy
(wishing she had more inclination and talent to write about nature . . . ) |
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