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Why Have You Done This?

Contributed by Kitty06 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:54:43 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Right now I feel like I just wanna roll up and die,
As I sit here holding my heart an’ I just cry and cry,
How could you leave me here? How could you lie?
Why don’t you tell me, look me straight in the eye?
Look at all the hate and anger that sprung up from this!
Look at all the people who’ve ended up on my list!
I wish I could punch you with the knuckles on my fists,
But that’ll later on then cause me to slice up my wrists.
You wouldn’t want that would you, even since you’ve become such a *****.
I can’t even hate you as I sit here and you prod at this cancerous cist,
Why have you done this, why have you done this to me?
We were so happy back when we all used to be 'we'.
Why is this so hard for you two both see?
I really want you both here with me,
But you better listen good to what I’m gunna preach,
I don’t want my friends to suck like a bloody frickin’ leech,
Because for your throat is where next I’ll reach,
And every moral left I’ll breach,
Because you have taught me something I never wanted you to teach,
And that’s how to hate and hurt and hot care about 'we'!

Copyright Â© Kitty06 ... [ 2005-06-01 21:54:43]
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Re: Why Have You Done This? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:59:42 PM AEST
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I can not believe this am I the first one commenting on this wonderfully truely chilling expressive poem? I really loved it. Your rhythm went along perfectly and your rhymes were awesome. SLipSiX.

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