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what you see
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:13:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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what you see
is what you think
is the real me
your wrong
you think im
loud
well kept,
stupid person
and the truth is
for from what
you think
brace yourself
ip ut on this front
so you dont know me
you wont know the truth
you wont know me
behind these eyes
is hurt, pain
and anger
buried deep w/in
can you see it?
can you see these tears
burning to come out?
NO.
bc you dont look
you think
shes loud, and outspoken
shes fine
theres more than
meets the eye
dont forget it
maybe one day you'll understand
but remember this
im who you want me to be
whose stupid now?
not me
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2005-06-01 21:13:27]
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Re: what you see
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by twisted_dreams on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:17:08 PM AEST
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great write i liked it alot..! keep up the good work!
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Re: what you see
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:29:34 AM AEST
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| Nice write, very heartfelt with a touch of venom. i like it. |
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Re: what you see
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by i_heart_herby on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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| awesome write! this was a really good read! Keep it up....... |
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