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tears
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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tears
blurr my vision
blurr my sense of reality
blurr everything
as i wipe
the overflow of tears
from my eyes
i sniffle
you walk up to me
as i push my tears aside
you wont see
the tears i cry
you ask whats wrong
i say nothing
and take off
running as fast as i can
i stop short
no longer able to breath
i sit down
and start to cough
i pull my hand away
from my bouth
to see red bloches,
blood
i get up and
walk the rest
of the way home
coughing every so often
when i stumble
through the door
i notice my white shirt
is now covered in blood
owell
i thought
i sat down
contemplating my next move
i pull the knife
from my pocket
and put the cold blade
to my warm flesh
pushing hard
kind of wanting to feel
what i always had
pain
i fiercly cut
pushing harder
and harder
over my wrists and arms
as i start to see
all the drops
of the shimmering
blood run down my fingertips
i take the blood
and draw a picture
on my wall
i loved it
it said so
many things
in a simple,
yet perfect picture
i was forced
to go to the hospital
that day
i got a total of 53 stiches
the scars
remind me
of wat im capable of
of who i am
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2005-06-01 21:04:35]
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Re: tears
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by twisted_dreams on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:08:09 PM AEST
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Great write..and i hope that you dont cut yourself.. its not the way out of all your problems.. Good write and keep it up!
Sidney |
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Re: tears
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by Kitty06 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:50:51 PM AEST
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| This poem has so much emotion in it. From tears to blood running down, it's a wonderful piece. I would love to know what exactly that picture on the wall is though, maybe that can be your next poem. Keep writing amazing things! |
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Re: tears
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by mylastwords on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:16:52 AM AEST
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Awesome write. I can relate in some ways. I like the emotive language you use, and I like the length. Don't be sorry, it needed to be that long!!!! Keep your head up, things will get better. Have hope. If you need a friend, just send me a message!!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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