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Blind Soldier
Contributed by
senorwoohoo
on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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A boy submerged in a world of men,
is searching for truth, but let down again.
He throws on a mask to confuse them all,
attempting to run, but he only can crawl.
Next is the sword, to slice and to stab,
the other hand free, to punch and to grab.
On his back is a bow, to attack with range,
his eyes like an eagle's, his thoughts start to change.
Truth is diminished, his former ways drained,
his new focus hate, his shirt that is stained.
Blood runs through his veins, a new found lust,
all of this stemming for a lack of trust.
Propaganda and ignorance, blossoming there-after,
as the body count rises, so does his laughter...
Copyright ©
senorwoohoo
... [
2003-01-02 22:20:00]
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Re: Blind Soldier
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by kimbo on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 06:43:42 PM AEST
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great i really enjoyed this it comes across strong and very clear to the reader. it also captures the readers imagination it took me along a path of how many wars are old mans wars that the youth of today get caught up in.
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Re: Blind Soldier
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 08:28:33 PM AEST
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Dear Senorwoohoo @-<-<<-
An excellent write here, I do so love your style and great respect as your words flow so..
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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Re: Blind Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:58:59 PM AEST
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| I agree with Kimbo....another powerful write! Well done again! Rakerman1999 |
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Re: Blind Soldier
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by riverofwords on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:29:04 AM AEST
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clear and strong ..this leaves the reader in no doubt at all
powerful write .
peace be your journey
terry |
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