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Army of One
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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blood-thirsty mosters
blocking out the sun
stricking so swiftly
the screaming hasn't begun
bringing down others
around you like hay
chopping there lifes out
makes your world start to sway
left standing alone
encaged by your fear
cut down by everything
you once held so dear
gleaming metal
shines and blinks in the dust
you dive and you grab it
covers your hand with rust
you dive and you swing
and you push it all in
killing persuers
attacking fair game
killing persuers
attacking fair game
but as you knock one down
two more swing into place
a shot flashes out
its an airel view
with you in the middle
fighting off a black glue
it will cling to your body
suck away all your life
stick to your spirit
overcome you with strife
the battle on lingers
as you start to feel pain
the shortness of breath
as you realized no distance you gained
all other are gone
so abandoned alone
left to stick it all off
sticking to your own code
fighting off demons
burden waying a ton
you stand alone you are an
army of one
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spazz911
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2005-06-01 20:16:12]
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Re: Army of One
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST
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interesting write here kc... dont kno exactly what youre getting at with this... i see sumthing but it isnt quite clear... but sprints, i hope u appreciate this! well written spazz.
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Re: Army of One
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:22:06 PM AEST
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i love it, kc, i really do! and now that i read it a second time- i like it even more!!! lol. an army of one- me, myself and i. thanks for using me as inspiration to write this. i do love it!!
keep up the good work, kc!!
~sprints |
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