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Unfamiliar Faces
Contributed by
twisted_dreams
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 06:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look at the people
that i thought i once knew
but something is different
between me and you
we used to be so close
but now so far apart
i try to see what's happening
by looking deep inside my heart
i just dont understand
why this isn't right
i try to see the real you
while blocking out the light
I've looked at you all
and seen what's gone down
and i try to smile quickly
before i turns into a frown..
i wish it was the same
exactly like it used to be
we would all be the same
together they would see
but i know that won't happen
because of the changes we've went through
i wish i knew those faces
and all that came with them too!
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twisted_dreams
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2005-06-01 18:57:01]
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Re: Unfamiliar Faces
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by broken_hearted09 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:47:16 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem.. I think it is great.. But we need to talk! Cuz I also want things to be the same as they use to be!!
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Re: Unfamiliar Faces
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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| This is a really awesome poem, it's really sad but it's still awesomely written, and I think it might be one of if not your your best... but I really do hope you talk to broken_hearted09, maybe something could change, spill your heart to her and see what magic could happen... good luck, and good write. l8erz |
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