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you, you YOU
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Do you think that I try to fail? to lose?
You think my life is gravitated around drugs and booze.
How do you kow what goes on inside my head?
You can't make judgement from anything I have said.
I don't trust anybody but me
Everyone else is just evil candy coated sweetly.
I mask everything from you, I lie
Building a wall around my heart so I don't cry.
Can't you see?
Dont you care?
Do you dare?
To understand?
I need a friend,
I need someone to stick by me to the end.
F*ck Me, I scream in the night,
I lay in bed, sweating from fright.
Lying awake to wait for your call.
Seems you don't care at all.
Your slowly drifting away,
Nothing helps, Nothing I can say,
Kate Ecklund
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Re: you, you YOU
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:22:05 PM AEST
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suicidal Ibecile
My gosh such an angry write.
I hope he learns to listen
No lies nothing,but truth
Trust is the key to any relationship.
I hope you feel better after venting.
your friend
Sinned
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Re: you, you YOU
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:33:55 PM AEST
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| Nicely vented write! Flow was a little off, but overall not too bad. Scorp. |
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Re: you, you YOU
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:02:50 AM AEST
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F*&# the flow Scorp this was a great write. I enjoyed this Kate it had so much anger and its great to see you get it out. I’m sorry this person cant be their for you and believe me I feel you girl. You write so awesome and they truly draw me in to feel all your emotions and pain. This write really left my heart wanting to hold you and comfort you. It hurt when you care for someone and they cant return the love and care you give. Take care my friend and know there is someone here that cares event though I cant see you face to face. Bye for now….Steve
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