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beat me, its called defeat
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:31:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Here I am afraid to show,
my true self.
Afraid to be ridiculed for my glow.
Rudolf was an amazing foul.
His heart was warm,
fired soul.
So who am I?
A diseased mind?
A loser in your eyes?
I wont be down,
Just because of you lies.
I'll keep myself above the ground.
By my cheap highs.
Here I am again alone.
Help me to find,
a comfortable home.
One that we can share.
One I can call my own.
Kate Ecklund
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suicidal_imbecile
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2005-06-01 11:31:40]
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Re: beat me, its called defeat
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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| Very nice write, filled a lot unanswered questions and angst. I liked it very much and hope to see more! |
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Re: beat me, its called defeat
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:58:51 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. Though I don't really understand the line 'Rudolf was an amazing foul.' Anywayz, I'm sorry that it took so long for me to comment on one of your poems, I still remember that you commented on mine. Keep posting! |
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Re: beat me, its called defeat
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 03:53:52 PM AEST
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| i understand how you feel. keep it up. |
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