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Slip Away...
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:41:44 AM in AEST
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forget me
forget i ever lived
forget that i ever walked on the earth
so i can easily slip away...
take me
take me down
death's arms are welcome here
so i can easily slip away...
hate me
hate me with all your heart
for when i die you will not care
so i can easily slip away...
kill me
kill me now
before i do it myself
let me just slip away...
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Re: Slip Away...
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:54:21 AM AEST
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This is so sad!! I am sure there are so many who care...even tho we are all in different worlds... Don't give up or give in, Jennie.. you are young and have so much of life ahead of you...so much to live for. It may not seem so now but trust me....there is....
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Re: Slip Away...
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by sprinter27 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 01:15:50 PM AEST
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no, jennie!!!! i love the poem, but i will absolutely NOT let you go or slip away from me. i need you, believe it or not, i do. jennie, please don't slip away from me. you know you and kc are my absolute best friends!!! no more nicole, she's just out of my life- let's face it. i need you jennie to be here! please don't let go.
your BFF,
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Re: Slip Away...
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:01:14 PM AEST
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| A very dark and sad poem... i hope you keep your head high and keep writing these heartfelt poems. Take care |
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Re: Slip Away...
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by eternityandaday4u on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:45:33 AM AEST
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| very sad... very dark... i hope the best for you... ive had times when i feel like that too but it gets better... life always gets better even after the worst storm... life is what you make it... so make it worth while.... lots of love always smile eternity |
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Re: Slip Away...
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:09:52 PM AEST
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Sweet Blue Angel, this poem is so sad, and since our poetry is an extension of our heart, I feel your bleeding. Please Jennie raise your head erect and reconsider all of your blessings, and then know that we at YPDC love you so.....Reconsider again, and be thankful you write poetry. It's a gift you know...that's why not everyone can do it!
This was well written, very sad, and hopeless...hope you feel better tomorrow, and thank you dear for all you fine comments on my poems
Warm love and hugs to you
ConSue |
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