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Pale Blues
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I won’t keep you in the distance
Rather at home with me
Safe and sound
Where the fireplace of summer
And a candle light dinner
Warms the increasingly low temperatures
And raises the raging pulse
A razor sharp image
Right there in front
Close enough to touch
I won’t keep you too far
In a sacred memory
Kept in my personal space
For all to witness
Is the answer of me
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2005-06-01 10:39:50]
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Re: Pale Blues
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:58:12 AM AEST
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| Really good write! Wonderfully written! |
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Re: Pale Blues
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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Lovely write Jyss....I'm glad to see your load has lightened as of late....
Scorp ; ) |
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