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The rose
Contributed by
Nixzy
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:03:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Alone in the garden the red rose grows,
Planted in the soil away from the hedge,
The rose is so pure and full of beauty,
The hedge is totally green that stands brightly.
The rose shows courage as it starts to grow alone,
The hedge has many offshoots that makes it less individual,
The rose has a defence system to keep it strong,
As the thorns stay sharp and attack if threatened.
The hedge is so simple as it grows into a block,
The rose has its posture of graceful enlightenment,
The rose is gracious,
Courageous,
And most beautiful.
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Nixzy
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2005-06-01 09:03:28]
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Re: The rose
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:06:25 PM AEST
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| this is a poem of beauty and poise. great write. |
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Re: The rose
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:12:27 AM AEST
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i like your choice of words.. good write.. keep it up.. best of luck
~Justin L.~ |
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