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soul that are look for a soulmate
Contributed by
mylady
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 06:03:28 AM in AEST
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Soul
Searching for a soul mate.
End up choose wrong soul.
Making a home.
Still the soul is not happy
but a lonely soul.
Down inside looking for
soul mate.
To make home.
Copyright ©
mylady
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2005-06-01 06:03:28]
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Re: soul that are look for a soulmate
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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| Try to be more positive in your outlook there are many people like yourself that are lonely or in need of a pair of comforting arms. look forward to eachnew day as it it is the day that you too may meet your soulmate. All the best now from bernard and keep smiling. |
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Re: soul that are look for a soulmate
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:35:26 AM AEST
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This was such a sad write. It was short but you got your thoughts across.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane xx |
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Re: soul that are look for a soulmate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:48:24 AM AEST
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So many I fear are caught in this demise.
A short piece, but your point is well expressed. |
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Re: soul that are look for a soulmate
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by crap_snapper on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:56:28 AM AEST
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| This is good, i like the way this sort of poetry is stripped down to a basic level without taking away from the meaning, if anything it adds to it. It seems to say more like that than pages of description or some sort of metaphor. Well done :) |
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