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She was crazy for you
Contributed by
oceandreamer
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She was crazy for you; now she’s part of something ells… walking along to distant shores, but the hurt in her eyes; it tells… of what’s hidden by the smoke screen... revealing; what’s not to be seen. Her eyes mirror to her soul; a love story to be told… She loved you so much; her heart once whole. The struggle within; not left with much; she has to go… She was crazy for you; now she’s part of something ells… walking along to distant shores, but the hurt in her eyes; it tells… of what’s hidden by the smoke screen... revealing; what’s not to be seen. The struggle within; not left with much; she has to go… maybe one day you’ll realize… someday; you’ll know.
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Re: She was crazy for you
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by crap_snapper on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:19:47 AM AEST
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| this is ok but it's quite difficult to read. If i was you i'd re-post and maybe break the lines to make the rhythm of the poem a little easier to follow. |
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Re: She was crazy for you
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by CodyJ on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:33:31 PM AEST
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| loved it even though it made my eyes go crossed. kudos |
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