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the grass is much greener on the other side
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:47:10 AM in AEST
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somebody once told me
the grass is much greener
so i started running
but never did i find the end
heaven is always somewhere else
and hell is always were i stand
happiness seems to elude me
but pain is always at hand
if life is about losing control
Of everything you know
And just letting go
then im about losing myself
and finding nothing in return
running till my life is ending
giving up on life without concern
beyond my search for love
beyond my search for life
beyond my search i seek
i looked for perfection
but dreams are hard to find
i looked for a life worth living
to bad im stuck with mine
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Re: the grass is much greener on the other side
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:09:01 AM AEST
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I guess that the way how life is my friend.
Its always beyond our reach.
great write |
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Re: the grass is much greener on the other side
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:15:53 AM AEST
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Strong finish---good job! This write was strung together pretty well for "not your best."
lol. I like the line; "Heaven is always somewhere else, and Hell is always where I stand..."
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Re: the grass is much greener on the other side
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:38:50 AM AEST
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For a not "mu best" poem this certainly was good. I loved the honesty and purity of this write.
You get high marks from me. Thanks for posting and sharing this with us.
Jane xx |
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Re: the grass is much greener on the other side
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:49:22 AM AEST
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I have always said that it was much greener but i will never really know until i get there. this poem was great. i liked it alot.
christina |
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