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Chains That Bind
Contributed by
SmokinJoeEvil
on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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These chains that bind
My hindered mind
Scratch and tear and shred.
I used to know
What high and low
Was dancing in my head.
Escape I try,
But by and by
The pieces fall behind.
Try getting back
What now I lack
But chains are all I find.
Copyright ©
SmokinJoeEvil
... [
2003-01-02 18:40:00]
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:43:01 PM AEST
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| Short but great poem I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:19:42 PM AEST
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| this is so sad. a really good write though. I like it alot. |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by thorns on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 02:25:20 PM AEST
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| this poem shows increadible writing tallent. in style and content it reminds me of songs by Lifehouse, but it is a unique voice. I enjoyed this so much i had to read it 3 times. |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:13:19 PM AEST
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Thank you! It happens to be one of my favorites among all the poetry I've written. I wish more than 3 per day could be posted here, as I have a slew of others I'd like to get reactions to. I just found this site a few days ago and really like the ease with which you can share and read poetry with any number of people.
Your "The Threshold of Forever" is another of yours I liked. You end your poems well. Again, thank you very much for your comments! |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:58:59 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Joe.. Enjoyed it very much...
Jenni |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by atwojay on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:22:28 PM AEST
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| Harsh, but beautiful. |
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Re: Chains That Bind
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by Stitch on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:27:56 PM AEST
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I like the brevity and the completeness of this. Nice stuff.
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