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The house on Haunted HIll
Contributed by
miss_erika
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The wind is cold and strong
and the shutters keep slamming shut.
Entering would be so wrong
In the house on haunted hill.
Thuds and screams behind every door
shawdows in the halls
bloodstains along the window sill
Once you here it all you wont want to be there anymore
In the house on Haunted Hill.
Whispers in your ears for scaring
enter if you do feel daring.
Going through all of this will make you want to shout
Your friends can wait, but you won't come out
of the house on Haunted Hill.
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miss_erika
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2005-05-31 21:29:52]
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Re: The house on Haunted HIll
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by youlied on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:35:54 PM AEST
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Oooh, creepy. A few mistakes that could be fixed:
shawdows=shadows
here=hear
Otherwise, I like it! |
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Re: The house on Haunted HIll
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by Sinned on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 07:46:26 AM AEST
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EEk
I'll wait outside.
I do think you could have gone into more depth about the scaryness of this haunted house,but it is an interesting read.
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