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MOMENT OF ANXIETY
Contributed by
kydistortion69
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:27:47 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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These thoughts raging in my mind,
the anger, the passion intwined,
to many questions, not enough time,
constant explosions, no room for rewind,
who do I trust?, what are the signs?,
what is reality?, what is a lie?;
Too many thoughts, too many questions,
nothing explained, no way to express them,
where is the reasoning?, the explanations?,
how can I believe in any one expression?,
only these thoughts brought into question;
The hurt, the pleasure blending as one,
completely exhausted, not quite done,
so much confusion on fire like the sun,
no beginning nor end, wish I was numb,
all these thoughts and emotions forging as one.
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2005-05-31 21:27:47]
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Re: MOMENT OF ANXIETY
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST
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oh excellent! i love ur rhyming style and the flow is terrific. i can relate to this because I am a very anxious person also and i get very nervous all the time...its horrible
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Re: MOMENT OF ANXIETY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:38:53 PM AEST
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