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Yet so...
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am still young but yet I feel so old and aged
Wrinkling away inside like a dirty scrunched up page
I am still breathing but yet the air in my lungs is waning
The oxygen is poisonous causing reckless damage and paining
I am still smiling but yet tucked away inside there lies a frown
A private sick person who in her own madness will drown
I am righteous but yet so soaked in sin and ungodliness
Never to be forgiven though I live in regret and nakedness
I am so creative but yet my thoughts do quickly fade
Just sit here in denial around the emptiness I have made
I am so purposeful but yet so aimless as I wander
Fooling everyone as I secretly run through all darkness and yonder
I am so ***** happy but yet so strangely dejected
Every day I live is sad as joy my heart has swiftly rejected
I am stable but yet so close to suicidal
I am so mournful in black but yet so near to being bridal.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-31 21:08:43]
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Re: Yet so...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:13:10 PM AEST
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| The good and bad...i love it |
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Re: Yet so...
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST
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Yes that is what we call life.
good write. |
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Re: Yet so...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:18:33 AM AEST
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Sad but very creative writing.
good work.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Yet so...
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:54:01 AM AEST
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A tragic poem filled with so much emotion behind it. i love the way you wrote it. Well done.
Jane xx |
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