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my life support
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I 've built me a life support
in the middle of mud
I wont sink down again
I've got it all figured out
I know how it works now
the structure I built
and I even have room on here
for a few of my friends
my joy in this craft
lifts me off of the ground
and nothing there is here
will pull me back down
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-05-31 20:07:35]
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Re: my life support
(User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:16:27 PM AEST
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interesting outlook kc... i am proud of u lol. terrific write. i like it alot. keep up the smiles! id like to see more of your poems catagorized in happy poetry!
luv n hugs,
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Re: my life support
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by Somnium on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:39:36 AM AEST
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Nice little encouraging shortie. makes you feel hopeful and optimistic.
Ben |
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