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mommy please know i love you(final copy)
Contributed by
allymp
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:19:02 PM in AEST
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Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
For your guidance I do seek
I need you so please remember
When we don’t seem to get along
And when you feel taken over by anger
I’ll love you my whole life long
It may not always seem that I love you
But mommy know I do
Because I’ll always be “your baby”
Even when harsh emotions seem to brew
But please know when it’s time to let go
For you can’t hold on forever
Although it may be tempting
You have to if you love your daughter
So Mommy I really do need you
But that’s not to say I can’t stand on my own
All I ask is you let go when its time
And leave me be to grow
To grow into the young woman
That you truly want me to be
A woman that can stand on her own two feet
But first you must set me free
So Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
But give me space to breathe
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allymp
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2005-05-31 19:19:02]
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Re: mommy please know i love you(final copy)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:58:04 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
I know from experience it's hard to let go.
keep writing and luving your mom. I'm sure she'll be understanding as by this write one can see she raised a beautifull, caring young lady.
huggs,
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Re: mommy please know i love you(final copy)
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by seriphsoul on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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| Well, at least you have a good relationship with your mother. Yeah, they don't like to let go, its like prying them off with a crow bar! But its a wonderful poem! |
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