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Catching my Dimwitted Clue
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:54:19 PM in AEST
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This is my attempt at an adult life, which has so far been incomparably unattainable
This is my last chance to do what’s right, my actions deliberately unexplainable
For when the wind starts to push and the clock blows its eerie horn
Then a rush, a desolate, forlorn, existence on my own
Only one other like it, to have ever been known
Befalls the power that be, that are
And plead with them to set him free
Unconditional love was promised
The creator never went back
For a promise on his word, was
All the quality this bastard had
For the genius in my myth
Was that it never ever got sad
When the bad never got good
And fate acted as it should
And the neo-believers
With their doubt-
There is no doubt!
I should have been thrown
Thrown the hell out!
Yeah, Out and About
Ill be strolling the cement
Yeah, around and then found
A life long teammate
On the rebound
Or on its way up
The ball still remains
Dancing and jiggling
Lingering, above the cup of the rim
The intelligent person sits backs and retorts
The stupid kid in class, plagiarizes his thesis report
While the researcher who spent his life locked in his chemistry lab
Studying the elements, shunned and unwittingly stabbed, In the back, of the bar,
Is a table for two, I arrived unattended, are you catching my dimwitted clue?
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Re: Catching my Dimwitted Clue
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:01:13 PM AEST
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Nicely done Jyss! I didn't think it was so dimwitted...lol Look out Jyss; you may be turning a new leaf here...romantic poems. lol
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Re: Catching my Dimwitted Clue
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:40:19 PM AEST
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I caught it in all its glory if its what i think it is..
(the silhouette with the words in contrast to the backround page?)
amazing..very origina..
very cool..
great write too :-)
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Re: Catching my Dimwitted Clue
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:21:34 PM AEST
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This gave me goose bumps. It got me.
My eyes was scanning and reading like I was running. I LOVED this poem.
Kie |
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