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Poem Interrupted
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:13:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My quiet sanctuary, where my inner self reflects on life
Bombarded, not with dreams on the clouds of fantasy
Invaded, not by pure escaping thoughts to misty mountain paths
My mind the battleground, echoes with the here and now
I close my eyes to disappear, to run into the dark
To fall into a sea of blue, to swim the depths of mystery
Yet the hand of reality reaches out, pulls me back
Envelopes and shakes me, brings me crashing to myself
Behind the mantle clock, the letters stacked unanswered
Notes as reminders of tasks to do today
Tick off the list, too much for such little time
Minutes waste into hours if you watch the world go by
The telephone rips the silence, more issues to attend
Errands, like demons,leap up from all around
Wheels turning in the wrong direction, steering me away
The pen now craves the ordered, not the creative mind
Forgive me now, I have to leave
The army of the day to day has vanquished imagination
So simply I end.Poem interrupted
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:53:10 PM AEST
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People are always way too busy now a days....and not taking time and sit down...and relax some...and mind the smaller things in life. Even tho they can be more awarding....
Very nice write steve....as usual.
Hugssss n xxxxx,
Nats |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:55:01 PM AEST
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this is awesome loved in start to finish very creative write
Michelle |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:08:33 PM AEST
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| this was fantastic..i truly loved it...thank you |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:33:42 PM AEST
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Nicely done! I liked this. Good expression.
Scorp. |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:54:19 PM AEST
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wow, steve you have captured the essence of poetry behind the sceens, this is wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:02:12 PM AEST
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Oh so true. Never enough hrs in a day. Running around doing this and that and not enough quality time for ourselfs.
Wonderful write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by seriphsoul on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:10:29 PM AEST
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| Very well write with a nice flow, I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:55:46 AM AEST
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Steve is so nice to be able to read your fine poetry again, even tho it is interrupted so! Do you ever hear from our dear friend? I write her, but there is never a return. The next time you speak with her, tell her I miss her please. And in the meantime let me enjoy your beautiful thought provoking poetry once again!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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Re: Poem Interrupted
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by rosethorn100 on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:47:37 AM AEST
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wonderful poem as always - yet so true
we don't have enough time for things nowdays - always there something we have to do or we too tired.
it a real shame we can't find enought time for ourself since life is a heavy tasks
huggggggggggggs rosey
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