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MY SOUL FOR YOU
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Picture of lust
tangle and deceive
magentic eyes
attraction bound
Road to hell
deposit my blood
relinquish my soul
Web of deception
you spin
taking my breath
grasp, then retreat
Develop my dreams
information absorbed
pick my brain
implant your seed
From my life
you feed
your energy source
i've gave all
my love, now
to my knees, i've
surrendered me
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sweetoccasion29
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2005-05-31 17:49:16]
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Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:04:55 PM AEST
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| nice wording. This was a pleasure to read. |
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Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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Sounds like a lot of sacrifice given 4 love
hope u got as much back , beautiful peice of
writting, deep and touching . . .
Ben
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Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:42:03 PM AEST
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"Pick my brain, implant your seed..." Awesome line. Well done.
Scorp. |
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Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU
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by seriphsoul on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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| Sounds like youd do anyhting for this person, very well written. |
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