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Today
Contributed by
i_heart_herby
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:49:25 PM in AEST
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I hold in my hands,
in the form of a knife.
With a jagged edge,
the end of my life.
The pain that you caused,
won't die away.
The end of my life,
that is today.
I can take no more,
as I thrust the blade in.
I cry out in pain,
blood flows from within.
My vision is failing,
as the blood flows free.
I'm lost to the world,
no more you and me.
Forever alone,
that was my fate.
To you I'm lost,
no longer will I wait.
Copyright ©
i_heart_herby
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2005-05-31 15:49:25]
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Re: Today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:08:13 PM AEST
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| good rhyming! This gets out a lot of anger and depression, and all the emotion is there. Nicly done. |
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Re: Today
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:31:06 PM AEST
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This is a really good write---both creatively and emotionally....Good job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Today
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:58:43 PM AEST
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| really good emotion write. I liked it! woop woop! |
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