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crimson rain
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:38:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Springtime rain is falling
the sky remains so blue
springtime rain is falling
reminding me of you
springtime rain is falling
my tears they are the rain
springtime rain is falling
because of all my pain
beautiful creeks are flowing
to the salty ocean blue
they flow with salty tears
Ive shed because of you
beautiful rivers flood'th over
with my salty tears and blood
beautiful rivers flood'th over
then the sky shall soak them up
then one day the springtime rain
shall turn a crimson red
crimson rain from all my pain
from the blood and tears Ive shed
ill dance out in the crimson rain
my pain will then slowly seep
as i lay to rest in the crimson rain
no longer shall i weep
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: crimson rain
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:51:03 PM AEST
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Bethers_is_my_baby
Emotional write.
Farfetched imagination.
Hope we never see that rain
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Re: crimson rain
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:04:47 PM AEST
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very nice..
incredible imagery..
it flowed right of my tounge
beautiful write.
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Re: crimson rain
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by i_heart_herby on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:01:05 AM AEST
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| Very emotional, nice rhyming, good write. |
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Re: crimson rain
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:49:34 AM AEST
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| Passionate and imaginative...these words are magnetic. Well-done. |
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Re: crimson rain
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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I love it! Very beautiful thought. Keep writing! :)
--amanda-- |
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