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My Primordial Ache
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:05:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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every turn we take
a magical way to unbreak
the irreputable damage
the irreplaceable hate
the incapable escape
i hate the way you hold me
i hate the way you feel
i hate the slow and simple look
the cold and hard reveal
just keep your heart
and all your lies
keep your dreams
keep your ties
i'm tired
i'm worn and you're sick
making me
sick
i hate you
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weepingprophet
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2005-05-31 15:05:44]
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Re: My Primordial Ache
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:45:28 AM AEST
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| AWESOME, great write! |
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Re: My Primordial Ache
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:33:32 AM AEST
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An intriguing write, you definately have a unique talent ! :) Very deep and as the reader I am clearly emotionally informed of the feelings you are trying to portray throughout this poem.
Keep writing,
Take care,
Lots of love,
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx |
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