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On The Broken Wrists
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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when i close the book
put it on the shelf
the disassembled
mutilation of self
and i leave the image
the story
the fate
i leave it to dust
i leave it to wait
for the broken wrists
to untie the veil
untie the noose
escape the jail
the prison sentence
book of life
book of pride
i left you wrapped in the pages
i left you to rot
through the ages
you're a simple word
a namesake
on a tattered page of denial
i've locked you away
to receive a just fate
i don't feel you
i won't feel you
the inevitable ink on the paper
the inevitable regret on the shelf
the tempter the temptest
of hurting myself
the book is closed
the scarlet letter next to your name
marking you irrelevant to life
the traitor on the broken wrists
you're an inevitable life sentence
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Re: On The Broken Wrists
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by i_heart_herby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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| woah....i liked this poem a lot...it is REALLY good.... |
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Re: On The Broken Wrists
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:30:38 PM AEST
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| wow! great poem!!! keep up the good work! |
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Re: On The Broken Wrists
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:23:04 PM AEST
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| This is a really well expressed write. I liked this alot! You remind me of another poet on here...similar style. (compliment...) Keep up the great work! Scorp. |
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Re: On The Broken Wrists
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:44:09 AM AEST
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| amazing, well done! |
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