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In Honor Of Three Soldiers
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:40:06 PM in AEST
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Death can be better then life
for people take your death to heart
and remember your life, Life is
always their and people take
it for granted, Death is the end
of a life forever, Life is just another
day for people to forget about,
Why is our life’s this way, Why
do we wait tell death to honor a
life, We need to live everyday
like it is our last,
Why can I be over in Iraq and
Not get a call from certain friends
For 2 months, If I died they’d all
Show up claiming they new me,
Life can show us our true friends
the hard way, Sad can be happy for
memories are sweet whether they
hurt or not they bring strength, Pain
can be bitter but happiness can be
found in grief,
But why wait for death to enjoy the
sweet joys found in life, Death is only
bitter when you missed the joys of that
life,
So take pride in your Love, Friends
and Family, All will die but will you
rejoice in their life or only remember
their death, If we were their for their
life and love we never will have to
Morn their death, Death is sad but their
life should live on forever, I pray my
death be forgotten for it was not life,
Remember the way we lived not the way
we died, Memories can be beautiful if
only you let them live, Dwell on the
thoughts of a living soul event after death,
So they may live on forever through your
dreams, Much love forever to my true
friends and brothers who gave their lives
for their fellow Comrades and their
country, You will be remembered forever
in my heart.
~Steve~
Dedicated to:
SGT Charles Drier, 15 May 1977 - 24 May 2005
SPC Dustin Fisher, 9 March 1982 - 24 May 2005
PFC Jeffrey Wallace. 12 Feb 1985 - 24 May 2005
You died so we can be free and live a life of
Freedom. Your life’s will never be forgotten
And will live on forever.
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-31 13:40:06]
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:15:06 PM AEST
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hey! i honor you!!! u are a very brave man!!!!! i dont like war, but i really apreciate what u are doing!!! and also ur a great poet! i luv ur work!!! keep it up!! and please make it home safely!
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:20:17 PM AEST
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I honor and pray for all the men and women overseas fighting for our country. Whether I agree with this war or not, I still honor the military men and women and their families sitting at home awaiting their return. God bless you all, deceased and alive. May the spirit of the Lord always live within you.
Rita |
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:51:42 PM AEST
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| Wow Steve, great write...really good. Straight from the heart...I'm so sorry for your friends you lost. Scorp. |
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by crap_snapper on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:00:28 AM AEST
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| I think this poem starts well but in the end the constant use of 'life' and 'death' didn't really work. |
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:41:49 AM AEST
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so sad... a beautiful tribute steve, i wish that wars would cease to be.... you be careful over there, and if you ever need a friend to talk with, im only a pm away:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:56:15 PM AEST
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Lovely Poem steve..I am so sorry for the lost
Makes me sad. Men and Women losin there life for our freedom its tough i know..
I am a lil sad right now about this today found out my brother going back to iraq in aug..:-(..
I pray for peace and all ya'll safe return soon. Keep up the great work.. you are a true Poet
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: In Honor Of Three Soldiers
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
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Hi Steve
Just read your write and i think it is fantastic. You write with such passion and honesty. My thoughts and prayers are with you and the other great people fighting over there for USA. I think you are fantastic!
Kind Regards Tara |
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