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As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I walk down this lonely street, gentle wind against my face,
My mind slips from reality, while sweet visions take its place.
I think about all the ‘could have been’s’ that fate has now denied,
The things we might have shared in love and that is when I cried.
Your hair so soft like velvet, how it frames the perfect face,
Will gently toss when you walk by, sweet beauty to embrace.
But my fingers will not touch your face, so tenderly with care,
To gently brush across your cheek or run softly through your hair.
Your smile how it warms my heart and steals my breath away,
But your smile it does not shine for me, no matter how I pray.
And my mouth will never know the taste of parted rosebud lips,
That softly would have brushed on mine, sweet passion in their tips.
Your gentle eyes that steal my soul, will no longer look my way,
Though I long to see you even more with every passing day.
And the hands I long to hold in mine, to take and make my own,
Will never know the love I feel or the feelings that have grown.
Each moment that I think of you and the things that will not be,
Breaks my heart and leaves me torn, if only you could see.
But reality comes crashing in, I must face the bitter cost,
I loved an angel with all my heart, but in the end I lost.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 04:55:19 PM AEST
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| Oh, I am so sorry ... but this is a most beautiful poem and conveys your love and pain so well. Beautifully written. |
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Re: As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 07:33:06 PM AEST
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| Oh, the tear that fall, may you always have a beautiful memory of your true love, thanks for sharing, |
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Re: As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
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by Sexygirl on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 08:41:00 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely written.....your words, emotions were so clear....well done.....I really enjoyed this one.... |
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Re: As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
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by Lia on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 11:55:27 PM AEST
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| wow Doug..this is beautiful..another awesome write from you..but then again..you haven't written a bad one yet :P |
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Re: As I Walk Down This Lonely Street
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:28:40 PM AEST
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I'm sorry your heart was broken,but I'm more sorry for the woman who didn't fall in love with you ! How can she not love a man who writes such sweet verses for her?! Either she's blind or just plain crazy......Yet another amazing piece,
PumpkinPie |
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