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Unorganized thoughts
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:41:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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In the past I bled to feel,
In the future I'll bleed to heal.
Heal this heart of breaken dreams.
Reality is not what it seems.
Crawl back into darkness so deep.
My minds black, Maybe I'll sleep.
Not tonight, I'm boggled down.
Minds soaking, My brains about to drown.
Sing me a goodnight song.
Rest my soul, from my inner bomb.
I hope you don't take too long.
Are you comming back?
Did I do something wrong?
I'll hold you deep inside of me.
Trust me, I'll trust you.
Together we can be free.
Free from the pain we've been put through.
If I tell you.
Will you tell me whats wrong?
You feel, I know it.
Don't believe me? Read your song.
As I said before,
My name is Kate,
And F*ck do I believe in fate.
Just don't treat me like a whore.
Give me the same respect I give to you,
Then we wont be distracted by aguing and f*ck you toos.
Kate Ecklund
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Re: Unorganized thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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Re: Unorganized thoughts
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:02:18 PM AEST
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suicidal imbecile
You have a special talent for writing.I will have to get back to your site. Please eunderstand if it is a while.
There are so many others that deserve comments too.
I rally enjoy your work.
Keep posting.
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