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Milk nightmare shakes
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:48:52 AM in AEST
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In my corner
the sun is bleeding
blue wet tears
and pills i'm needing
Yes i'm addict
milk nightmare shakes
toss and turn
through black heartbreaks
I'm oily skin
smooth pill coating
no soap does clean
a body's bloating
but thoughtfully, i thought
i'm here in the grass
with glowing smile
the sun still showing
a future's mile...:)
dw
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Re: Milk nightmare shakes
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:45:43 AM AEST
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The beginning was awome, but I coulnd't get what you were trying to say about the mile... maybe its just me. But yes addictions a b*tch, I know how you feel
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Re: Milk nightmare shakes
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:12:42 PM AEST
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| Wonderful job....the road of adiction is a hard road....Hope you make it that next mile...i know i havent, with my own. |
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Re: Milk nightmare shakes
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:18:04 PM AEST
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addiction's a hideous thing for sure..
my heart bleeds for you..
been there myself..
much love to you friend..
Billy |
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Re: Milk nightmare shakes
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:14:11 PM AEST
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| lovely read |
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